Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Formal Creative Writing Practice II

[incomplete]
Practice 2:
(a) each section is a stand alone subject
(b) I experimented with satire in some of these, either by using:

  1. internally incoherent grammar or concepts
  2. using a 2nd order set of moral claims which I don't actually believe.
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His head coming up, his hands half-heartedly lifted the chalice as he watched the silver raising radiantly for the world and radiantly raising, like the dawn from on high, unto those sleeping in the darkness of the pews and those kneeling in the shadow of the altar.



Writing with character choices makes realistic tales, but characters with good habits bore me like happily-ever-afters.   



If it should turn out authority is acknowledgment or force, or if it should turn out to be something else, I shall have to determine.    

This is my strongest critique of Christianity, I believe: it's ethically problematic, when one is not religious, to exercise their freedom of speech when I should pray another's prayers four times a day.    

O lyre, teller of tales;
ring out melody unto mine ears.
Let thy words strike double time,
words to seduce
wrapped in ribbons, coupled with wine.
Thy notes strangle the words,
pleasing tongues and minds,
to be double-fold by blood.

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Wednesday, March 27, 2013

Ironic Characters

for thou shalt go before the face of the Lord
                     
            to prepare his ways;
To give knowledge of salvation unto his people *
    for the remission of their sins,
Through the tender mercy of our God, *
    whereby the dayspring from on high hath visited us;
To give light to them that sit in darkness
and in the shadow of death, *
    and to guide our feet into the way of peace.


The character is the primary manner of articulating our being. It is the way of being, or a being on a way, in all its complexities, conflicts, and charity. Some characters look different inside different narratives, some cannot inhabit specific stories. The suburban housewife, the professional, the hipster, and the political pundit are ways of being inside an American narrative of the 21st c. So too the flapper girl, flower child, and "Rosie the riveters" were characters only possible in certain narratives of the 20th c., though they probably didn't co-exist temporally for historical reasons.

Of course history is just a narrative itself, told by characters from another time. What is to one character from one time, one city, might be the Dark Ages. To another it was one of the greatest times for Missions, a time of the great Carolingian Renaissance. Depends on what character narrates. The 19th and 20th c. sees the fabrication of a new character under a new way of narrating reality, "the historian," creating side by side to "the scientist." Both are concerned with non-normative "facts" which dictate "objective reality." MacIntyre has put this better than myself, but such characters presume a rejection of functional concepts, thus there being no purpose/end to things. Man included. Mm, objective.

Reading a text then depends on the character. How we inhabit the world depends on our character. How we speak, who we befriend, what we worship, all depend on, but also form, our character. But what sort of characters are available to us today?

The Harlequinn is one. Out of interest I'll focus only on one dress, and how that functions toward character. There are of course many other strands.

(1) the hipster thinks dress is a conglomerate, material form of individuality, rooted in irony. Irony being a gap between expectation and actual. What is expected and what is, are both politically formed. The way we organize language, thoughts, images, and ideas all form what we expect, as well as how we act. But irony en masse is contradiction, for then it becomes cultural norm. Thus hipster is a self-refuting politic.

However, the Mass makes a qualified notion of individuality possible, for it beckons each to conform in order to be individual, recognizing the politic must maintain both the One and the many in a coherent way.

(2) the professional thinks dress is universal and a mark of authority. They can both sweat and freeze within the same hour, going from a hot summer walk to lunch, to a frigid office. No one ever thinks to cut off the air condition and simply dress in shorts. A man who claims to be practical, a realist, the American pragmatist - yet does not know how to live in the world. The marks of authority: tie, the lab coat, a vest, a badge, all function as a source of pride. Pride because the professional believes he climbs a ladder of success, finding his place as earned, his mark as something to make him exalted by all others.

However, Humility climbs the ladder of love, finding her place as contingent on others and merited by Another, her mark as something which allows her to exalt the one which is above all others.


And so many other characters, wearing Irony like a robe. But I tire.
The garb of irony functions as a separation of what we are from what we say from what we do.
The professional divides private from public life, corporate loves from familial loves.
The hipster divides actual beliefs from spoken and embodied beliefs.
They are excuses for character, detached from any belief, shrouded in the shadow of their irony.
Eventually one form collapses upon the other, the irony becomes unironic; self-deception follows suit.
The only irony that remains is their mutual laughter at one another.

The only thing left to do in such a contentious culture of irony, is to debate the meaning of irony, or resort to bombastic, elongated, literary diatribes on the proper (a priori) meanings of irony. Of course characters give concrete, collective uses of irony, thus meaning since this is how language is constituted. Thus irony cannot be understood outside the political structures we inhabit, the characters that are available, the narrative we find ourselves in.

In an ironic culture, there is no irony of yesterday. The new irony would be to conform to a character that is not hodgepodge but unified, to dress simply, to not make choices, to not have experiences, to wear a mark of authority puts us into our place thereby humbling us. I would offer the cleric as such a character. Much more can be said, but Morning Prayer approaches, and I am in need of sleep.

Tuesday, February 26, 2013

Formal Creative Writing Practice

Each sentence is stand alone. Tried three variations of each form.
  • She was savagely swept up in a current and drowned in foam and fury.
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  • He was later raised by a fisherman who buried him by sweat and shovel.
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  • She soon rested by my side breathing in dreams and exhaling hushed secrets.
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  • He wore a tattered pinstripe jacket, and the church bells rang for the work shifts to begin.
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  • A hot breeze rolled over the hill, and the spring odors swelled with blood and rot.
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  • His words were discomforting white lies, but his casket had beautiful lining.
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  • I became aware of reality again in the middle of saying the creed, on account of not having a consciousness, since the death of Freud at least.
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  • The alms were given, since scarcity is scarce, to the blessed poor.
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  • The cassock was dark, black is its only color after all, whether in day or night.
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  • Our judgment came before the fire, and like the fire, it was kindled more by the burning pages.
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  •  The end started with the beginning, and as the beginning, it introduced the reader to the hero.
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  • His hating eyes began before my response, and like the response, it began building to a violent conclusion.
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  • Divinity School can be a faith community; they can have their own gods.
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  • Time is money, we're convinced we can own it.
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  • Appeal to authority is a fallacy, or so I'm told.
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  • Many things drive us to attempt to consume God's being, the most distasteful, that I've witnessed, are experiences.
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  • There are a few good ways to cook a fish, the best of which, in my opinion, is in a plate.
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  •  Of all the forms that charity takes, the only one that matters, contrary to the spirit of the times, is in the form of our souls.

Prayer Vigils

Prayer vigils have become functional protests.
Protests are rain dances.
Rain dances also include walks, rides, and marches for money and/or awareness.
We might use a tool to an end,              -but it habituates us to its functions.

  • those with a hammer think every problem is a nail
  • those who play on the phone think friendships are kept through text messages
  • those who hold "prayer vigils" think prayer is a special occasion
                  • instead of a way of life
    • think God is a legislator to write to
      • a monarch to protest, or protest to
Just as I'm habituated to think in lines on papers and writing software
because my paper since childhood consisted in lines
because I was trained to write in lines

We are not so easily removed from tools.
We use them to shape the world, and they shape us in the process.
Creation shapes the creature, the creature shapes creation.
Dominion does not entail separation, nor asymmetrical influence.
Lest we end up with silly prayers:

Almighty God, Father of all mercies. We your unworthy servants pray to you on this most special of occasions, not in thanksgiving or in praise, but in intercession alone. Thou alone art our tool to secure perpetual blessedness on this earth, that you might fully heal the world. Thou hast sent thy beloved Son, who stretched out his arms on the hard wood of the cross that we might pray when we are outraged at the unredeemed world. Send thy Senatorial Spirit amongst us that we might change the laws of the world. Trusting in thy manifold lobbying, we pray you to come to our aid to change the powers that be -- just as thy Son did by his death on a cross. Amen.

Give us the faith of thy patriarch Job who brought you, O Lord, to trial. Give us the faith of those who brought you to trial a second time before the Sanhedrin and the Romans. Give us the faith to bring others to court, that we might ensure others take up their crosses. We entreat thee to hear these, the prayers of The People, that you might see it fit to baptize our earthly city, for we have already baptized you in the waters of the world Lord. Hear, and read, our petitions O Lord, for the signatures are great in number. We beseech thy vetoing power that is inner governance of The Three Holy Branches of thy being: as it was in the beginning, is now, and will be forever, world without end. Amen.


...joining our voices with political forefathers and pundits and all the companies of the world who forever sing this hymn to proclaim the glory of thy name:

Of course such prayers are not common, but sinners thinking they are pure enough to create their own liturgy is quite common. The form is much more subtle and devious than such satirical and improvisational prayers. God in my image, a god of my disposition, is no god at all, but an idol. God is the one who sides with me on how things ought to function inside the world. I'm not sure where one stands to make such a claim. If one is inside the Church, live within that city, that political, moral community. It is in the world but not of it. If one insists on making utopian like comments on how the city of the world ought to function, they become caught up in a grander conversation. A conversation that presumes the truth of certain political and social organizations that contradict the Church's own structure and functioning.

The world has already been redeemed.
God already tried to change the world and we killed him for it.
What good will we do holding silly prayer vigils for political action?
Are we so foolish?

There is of course a proper use to prayer vigils, e.g. for the deceased. What we have functionally around academies and larger cities though is, well, something else. We forget God's activities by which he has revealed himself. We forget the cross and take up the flag, even when we fool ourselves into thinking we're working so hard against the particular content of the flag. It's form wraps around us, and we smile as it slides around us, and we make it our own. We come to love it, for what it can do, how it can be used to do the will of God, so we cut a cross out of its fabric thinking it pure. So we hold prayer vigils for political action, raise up the "community," storming God or the world or both by prayer, making both our captive audiences.

Vigils like this are idolatry.